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[b]Trapped[/b]
[i]I didn't use the word 'trapped' at all in this poem.. But that is exactly how I felt[/i]

Where were you
When I needed to see you?
Dates missed
Promises you didn't see through
When I needed to talk
You were never around
Too busy spreading lies
And putting me down
And still I came back
Again and again
You were always an abuser
Never a friend
You checked up on me
As if I was a child
And I fell for it every time
I was in denial
Never again
Will I be abused
I've grown stronger
And I'm over you

well done Kobra /biggrin.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':D\' />

the strength you speak of having found shows in your words. keep writing, I would like to see more from you /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />

Good job, simple words, but arranged in a way that made me FEEL what you were saying. It brings out the starkness of the emotion being expressed /good.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(Y)\' />
More please.

Encore Encore !!

[color=\"green\"]thats very good kobra, maybe just add some grammer into it /blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' /> ..yanno, full stops..commas..semi colons..the usual poetry stuff /bigwink.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\';)\' /> ..just breaks it up a bit, other than that its great /good.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(Y)\' /> [/color]