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[color="green"]i was bored one night, and waiting to use the shower... so i wrote this down in ohh... 5 minutes? ...enjoy <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />

[quote name=\'The Picture\']See that picture on the wall, it shatters then it slips and falls, to end her story.
Wipe the smile from her face; charm her with the devils grace, to see her falling down.
Lifeless girl. Pain of world.
Something she’s been dreaming of.
Lifeless girl. Pain of world.
Time has left its mark.

Copyright James Vercoe 2006[/quote][/color]

hmmm...interesting verse, verczeh

[color=\"green\"]tis isnt it? <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... >/blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' /> lol [/color]

Yes....what you've written could be interpreted a few different ways; well done, you leave the reader pondering. <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />