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[Vercz]

[color="green"]yeah yeah, i know...ahh well..gives me a kick.. *shrugs*
these have not names yet

[quote]why do i bother?
why do i care?
is anyone listening?
is anyone there
too few people,
know who i am.
too few people,
care who i am.[/quote]

[quote]those who i know,
i hurt for.
the pain i have caused,
the further i dragged.
i thought i was helping,
i thought i was kin
instead of pulling them out,
i dragged them further in.[/quote]

[quote]yearning, burning
desperately learning.
i am alone, i am but loved
in this house, i see who i am
never destined,
to be anything great
instead im meant,
to suffer..in pain
agony is, as agony does
silently creeps, striking down
those who believe, they should drown.
pain is fickle, little know what
pain really is, lucky for them
i wish not, this pain upon anyone
it is too much, i have lived for too long
now i must go, drop the pain,
never again, breathing this life,
this hellish existence, that they call life
i was born, only to die
i was raised, only to cry,
innevitable..[/quote]


Copyright 2004 - Me, Under My Real Name[/color]

[Electrix]

Very; Very nice.

[Tami]

well done Vercz, they all have a good flow & rhythm; a few grammatical & spelling errors but over-all, some good pieces <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />

[Baralai]

Very Awsome Verceh <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... >/good.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(Y)\' />(Y)<img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... >/good.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(Y)\' />(Y)<img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... >/good.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(Y)\' />