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Hey there boys and girls. Some of you might remember me posting saying I had been asked to do a couple of images for work, well they have also asked me to do them a new website for a mobile phone offer that we are doing over the festive period. All the design has been done to their spec, and the only freedom I had was with the header of the page. Im pretty pleased with the overall look of the page. The only part I dont like is the text for the handset and tariff information. For some reason they wanted the text to be larger than all the other text on the page. Why? I dont know. Some feed back would be nice please guys and gals. Tah.

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[url=\"http://www.geocities.com/blue_milk17/site.html\"]http://www.geocities.com/blue_milk17/site.html[/url]
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[align=center][color=\"#CC0000\"]"You may give a toad a wart, but a toad will never give you a wart"[/color][/align]

[align=center]eighty4toads.co.uk[/align]
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Post by Tami »

Looks good to@ds (cept for the white bits...don\'t like white sites, but that\'s a personal thing) The overall design is very clean and organized, something I do like in a site.
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Post by Marko »

yeh looks very professional, i have no crits except the \"Merry\" ion the header is hard to read.
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Post by Sp3culuM »

The text at the top looks a little small to me ("Move Your Mobile was established..").

[quote]The only part I dont like is the text for the handset and tariff information. For some reason they wanted the text to be larger than all the other text on the page. Why? I dont know.[/quote]

Basic rule of advertising dude, make the parts you want the people to see stick out more than the rest.

Apart from that it looks pretty smart, gj /good.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(Y)\' />
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Post by Jim »

Looks good to@ds /good.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(Y)\' /> a bit bright for me though.
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It's alright, I think it lacks in areas though.
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Ok, slightly changed version of the site, finaly finished. Take a look now please guys, and some more feed back. And to spec, we did make the bits stand out we want people to see, hence the bolding on some of the text.

[url=\"http://www.moveyourmobile.co.uk\"]http://www.moveyourmobile.co.uk[/url]
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[align=center][color=\"#CC0000\"]"You may give a toad a wart, but a toad will never give you a wart"[/color][/align]

[align=center]eighty4toads.co.uk[/align]
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Post by Tibs »

Looks really tight /blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' /> Wish I could code like that /cry.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':(\' />
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Post by Sp3culuM »

Typo in the header /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />
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I dont code, too slow. I wysiwyg! Wheres the typo? <----- V.stupid sorry
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[quote]Welcome to Move You Mobile[/quote]

Big friendly blue letters at the top, can't miss it /blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' />
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Post by RuffRyders »

And perhaps at the bottom where it says layout by yourname, perhaps you could have a link to your e-mail address or a website, so people that like the sites design can contact you, which could help you earn more money/work. But then again, you might not want people contacting you.
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[b][i][color=\"gray\"][font=\"tahoma\"]The problem with putting your email address on websites is you need to be prepared to deal with spam email. If its a mailto: link then site spiders will get it and flood your inbox with spam. [/b][/i][/color][/font]
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I have my email in a mailto: on killablogs.com at the bottom, I don't get any spam /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />
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