Will You Remember Me?

[Vercz]

[color="green"]well hihihi to you all, it is i again! (sif you were expecting anyone else to post in this area <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... >/blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' />)

well, heres another one: its a twist on the old breakup strategy of "its not you, its me"

note: the first stanza is spoken <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... igwink.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\';)\' />
note2: italics are words edited to comply with the g-rating

[quote name=\'Will You Remember Me\']I just want you to know that
I dont blame myself, its all your fault
everything that has happened
everything that will happen
its all you, none of this was my fault
i'm beautiful, im funny, im perfect
you're not good enough for me
its over...

i see the sun break, for the first time in years
youre not controlling me, anymore...im free
all those things you said, used to drive me insane
and now that youve gone away, its freedom...again!

for the many times that we have shared, will you remember me?
for the few times that you did lie, will you remember me?
for the one time that i said bye, will you remember me?
against my will, as hard as i try, i will remember you

its your birthday i know, i wonder what youre doing
it was around this time last year, trouble started brewing
we promised to spend this day, together
you promised you would stand by me, forever

for the many times that we have shared, will you remember me?
for the few times that you did lie, will you remember me?
for the one time that i said bye, will you remember me?
against my will, as hard as i try, i will remember you

i saw you the other day, bent over an old commodore
looked like youd been round the town, like a common-[i]edit[/i]
gee look at that lump, that things almost ready for the cot
id say that im sorry, but the truth is...im not

[size=0]Copyright James Vercoe 2005[/size][/quote]

comments, suggestions?

appreciated, bai <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />

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[Adrasteia]

i cant really give any feedback other than i liked it:)
whens the ablum coming out?
nem

[Vercz]

[color=\"green\"]thanks nem <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />

album? ...when we find a drummer <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... >/blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' />

why does no-one around my area play drums anymore???[/color]

[Kobra]

Good job, Vercz.. We have plenty of drummers in my city <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... >/blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' />