Childstory

[Tibs]

Well as some of you know, I'm entering a 3d contest hosted on 3d attack. The assignment is to wirte a whort childstory and then modelling the cover of the book. Anywa just wanted to see if the sotry is ok.


" Tommy's day at the circus. "


It's the 4th birthday of Tommy, and his parents prommosed him to take him to the circus which has just arrived in town. This will be a whole new experience fot Tom because he has never seen any of the animals or clowns. Tommy has been looking forward to see the clows do their tricks. But when they leave for the circus Tommy almost forgot his favourite bear "Teddy". Luckely his father remember to put Teddy in the car when they where all getting ready. When they arrived at the circus Tommy is very curious to see all the animals and runs around happy. But in the meanwhile Tommy and his parents haven't noticed that he forgot Teddy by the lion cage. What Tommy doesn't know is that a clown who was running to his cabin found Teddy and picked it up. When the circus starts Tommy is very anxious to see what will happen during the show. When he and his parents enter the circus and look for there seats, Tommy notices he lost his bear. He can't watch the show without Tommy now can he, so he decides to go and look for him. Tommy sneaks away from his parents and finds a way out under the big sail. Meanwhile his parents are enyoing the show and aren't erally noticing that Tommy isn't there anymore. Tommy is now searching Teddy by the ape cage, suddenly he hears a monkey saying something. " Are you looking for something?" the monkey says, "Yes." says Tommy, " I'm looking for Teddy, my favourite teddybear. ". " Can I help? " asks the monkey. " I would really like that " answers Tommy. Now Tommy has the company of the ape and they are both looking for the Bear. After a while Tommy and the ape walk by the bear cage and hear the bear asking what they are doing. When Tommy explaind everything to the bear, the bear decided to help and look for Teddy. When they are looking for the bear, Tommy is having a lot of fun and get's to know the animals better. He also learnes how they live and how it is to live in a circus. They all have some very nice story's to tell Tommy so they kind off forget to look for Teddy. After a while, when the ape was supposed to perform in the circus Tommy's parents notice that he isn't sitting next to them anymore and start to panic. They run outside and ask around if no-one saw a little boy with a teddybear. After searching for a while the parents find Tommy sitting next to a bear and an ape laughing and having fun. When they ask Tommy what he was doing, he explained the whole story to his parents. Now that the parents had found Tommy and the missing animals the show could continue. Tommy still hadn't found his bear, but at the last part of the show the clown came on stage. He said he had a very nice surprise for one of the children in the audience, now he pointed at Tommy to come in the circle. Tommy went to the clown and sat on a small chair. The clown said he was going to do magic, he was going to magicly make something appear from his big black hat. The clown started the trick, making big waves over the hat and after the words "Sim Sala Bim" he pulled Teddy out of the hat. Tommy was very happy thet he got his favourite bear and he and his parents returned home after saying goodbey to the animals.


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[Tami]

A good story idea, Tibs <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />

I can help you with your English in the story. Perhaps you could have the clown overhearing the family discussing the search for the bear, or he hears the little boy crying because he lost his bear as a lead in to how the clown gets the bear.

[Tibs]

Well I only need 2 paragraphs and the english doesn't need to be perfect but I'll Use the clown thingie <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... >/blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' />