Please Let Me Go

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Devilish_Eyez
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Please Let Me Go

Post by Devilish_Eyez »

Please let me go

Empty sorrys
filled with nothing tomorrow
if you loved me
why cant isee your truth
where were you
when i was lost in anywhere
me myself i have nothing to prove
wont you let me see
tired of deception
and candy coated pills
still ill hide in the land
of purple clouds
where the pains cry red
and clowns hold knives
pull me close
into your cloak of pain
take away my everything sane
rain is falling
even the clouds feel
and bleed as they are cut
to love another
or love the same
whats it allmatter
when this is only a game
Kobra
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Please Let Me Go

Post by Kobra »

That was a really cool poem.. I loved reading it
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Vercz
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Post by Vercz »

[color=\"green\"]never did trust clowns...they scare me <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... sleepy.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(sleep)\' />

nice work devil <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... >/good.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(Y)\' /> ..kinda makes me want to start writing again <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... >/blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' /> [/color]
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