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Vercz
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[color="green"]well..this is a song really, i wrote it a yew nights ago for a friend..to show her that i knew how she was feeling..that i understood it all...you are loved sarah

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[quote name=\'Over It\']I feel like im finished,
With this world I am through
The critics all hate me,
To them I say, “[i]stuff[/i] you”
There’s nothing more that I can do,
There’s nothing more that I can say.
Just to see your face, any day…

I can’t believe you left me
Left me feeling blue
Take the road to heartache
In this world for two

Im sick of this [i]life[/i],
All the pain it’s caused.
Im over this now,
Let me out…take me home
Away from this place, away from alone.

I can’t believe you left me
Left me feeling blue
Take the road to heartache
In this world for two

Im over this now, Ive seen the truth
Your using me, for nothing but pain
Im over the hurt, im over the lies
Take me to pasture, and leave me to die…

I can’t believe you left me
Left me feeling blue
Take the road to heartache
In this world for two…in this world for…TWO!

[size=0]Copyright James Vercoe 2005[/size][/quote]

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Tami
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Post by Tami »

very well written, vercz. you have a poignant way with words, and that talent to make the reader feel the meaning behind the prose. <img src=\'http://www.killanet.net/forum3/public/s ... /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />
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[color=\"#41211C\"]It takes years to build up trust and only seconds to destroy it

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Post by Electrix »

very lubbly as usual <3. well done voiczeh.
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